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Monday, December 23, 2013
Saturday, November 2, 2013
The beginning of National Write A Novel Month
Hi everyone,
It is six'o'clock on Saturday evening November the second and I have written 0 words. I work a lot and writing 1700 words every day after working 8 hours or more is very difficult. I strive towards the day when I can write all day, because when it is all I have to do I can really lay some words down. The biggest challenge is starting and while at first I thought writing on my blog was just a form of procrastination I now realize that it could be a jump start for getting my 1700 words done and maybe making up some of yesterday's missed words. Another aspect I think will help is that I am writing towards something I have already started and starting in the small aspects and large aspects is the hardest part.
It is six'o'clock on Saturday evening November the second and I have written 0 words. I work a lot and writing 1700 words every day after working 8 hours or more is very difficult. I strive towards the day when I can write all day, because when it is all I have to do I can really lay some words down. The biggest challenge is starting and while at first I thought writing on my blog was just a form of procrastination I now realize that it could be a jump start for getting my 1700 words done and maybe making up some of yesterday's missed words. Another aspect I think will help is that I am writing towards something I have already started and starting in the small aspects and large aspects is the hardest part.
Thursday, October 31, 2013
Thursday, February 7, 2013
Democrats are Nazis Pt. 1
There are so many little things I would like to touch on.
1. Immigration
2. Used video games
3. Football
There are some others but now isn't the time.
First of all, immigration; I cannot fathom how it is any kind of good idea to let people who came in illegally to magically become citizens. And if I were someone who immigrated legally I would be infuriated. I mean these people came over here and already broke the law. So we want to reward criminals? I realize that some had good intentions, probably not many, most just came to leech, sure they may need help, but the way they went about it deserves nothing. Right off the bat these people are takers, which is why I think the democrats love the idea of making them citizens. It really boils down to this, the democrat politicians rely heavily on worthless and lazy people who have no chance in society without government assistance, handouts, etc.
I'm sorry but Romney was totally right when he said that 47% will never vote against democrats because they are dependent on the government. Its sad, IT IS TRUE, and it makes me sick.
The other 4% needed are some other kind of incompetent, who are too idealistic, immoral, and some kind of stupid.
Please anyone post some type of logical argument in favor of this amnesty proposal.
Now for a less serious idea. The companies that make video games want to make it impossible to buy used video games. Lets consider this, how do you feel about buying a 30,000 car you can never sell, I bet you would think about it twice. 30,000 you can never get any of it back, you are essentially stuck with it forever or throw it away. Most video game consumers consider $60 for a video game to be very expensive. And this reflects in lower tier games not being purchased, and the company that made those games don't recoup their investment, and many publishers have gone out of business, not for just this reason but it is a factor. So if you can't resell a game it will prevent even less people from purchasing games that they otherwise might give a chance. And there are a lot of people who flat out do not buy new games at least not until they have been out for a while and seen a significant price drop. I have 26 games in my PS3 collection I have purchased only 6 near full retail value and only 5 used all the rest I bought after they were severely discounted, but I guarantee you that if I did not get the 5 used games I would not have spent more for them, someone got money for them that they probably spent on another game, gamestop got money from it which helps people and the money I saved probably helped me justify buying one of the 6 games I got at near full retail value. I don't see how keeping people from buying games helps anyone and predict it will hurt everyone.
Right now I can get a NEW copy of Mass Effect 3 cheaper at Sam's club than used at Gamestop.
Finally I want to talk about Obama and football; The NFL is a capable entity, it is perfectly capable of regulating itself and must face it's own legal ramifications. The government has far too many problems right now that to worry about something that is not broken. If he is successful in changing the game well, the fans will abandon the NFL and start a new league simple as that, and if the government tries to force change will that is Tyranny and real Americans will not stand for it. The Government's job is clearly defined and most of the regulations it is attempting are not its job.
Stop wasting time on football and balance the budget.
Libertarians must really hate democrats they are always sticking their noses where they don't belong, just like the Nazis!
1. Immigration
2. Used video games
3. Football
There are some others but now isn't the time.
First of all, immigration; I cannot fathom how it is any kind of good idea to let people who came in illegally to magically become citizens. And if I were someone who immigrated legally I would be infuriated. I mean these people came over here and already broke the law. So we want to reward criminals? I realize that some had good intentions, probably not many, most just came to leech, sure they may need help, but the way they went about it deserves nothing. Right off the bat these people are takers, which is why I think the democrats love the idea of making them citizens. It really boils down to this, the democrat politicians rely heavily on worthless and lazy people who have no chance in society without government assistance, handouts, etc.
I'm sorry but Romney was totally right when he said that 47% will never vote against democrats because they are dependent on the government. Its sad, IT IS TRUE, and it makes me sick.
The other 4% needed are some other kind of incompetent, who are too idealistic, immoral, and some kind of stupid.
Please anyone post some type of logical argument in favor of this amnesty proposal.
Now for a less serious idea. The companies that make video games want to make it impossible to buy used video games. Lets consider this, how do you feel about buying a 30,000 car you can never sell, I bet you would think about it twice. 30,000 you can never get any of it back, you are essentially stuck with it forever or throw it away. Most video game consumers consider $60 for a video game to be very expensive. And this reflects in lower tier games not being purchased, and the company that made those games don't recoup their investment, and many publishers have gone out of business, not for just this reason but it is a factor. So if you can't resell a game it will prevent even less people from purchasing games that they otherwise might give a chance. And there are a lot of people who flat out do not buy new games at least not until they have been out for a while and seen a significant price drop. I have 26 games in my PS3 collection I have purchased only 6 near full retail value and only 5 used all the rest I bought after they were severely discounted, but I guarantee you that if I did not get the 5 used games I would not have spent more for them, someone got money for them that they probably spent on another game, gamestop got money from it which helps people and the money I saved probably helped me justify buying one of the 6 games I got at near full retail value. I don't see how keeping people from buying games helps anyone and predict it will hurt everyone.
Right now I can get a NEW copy of Mass Effect 3 cheaper at Sam's club than used at Gamestop.
Finally I want to talk about Obama and football; The NFL is a capable entity, it is perfectly capable of regulating itself and must face it's own legal ramifications. The government has far too many problems right now that to worry about something that is not broken. If he is successful in changing the game well, the fans will abandon the NFL and start a new league simple as that, and if the government tries to force change will that is Tyranny and real Americans will not stand for it. The Government's job is clearly defined and most of the regulations it is attempting are not its job.
Stop wasting time on football and balance the budget.
Libertarians must really hate democrats they are always sticking their noses where they don't belong, just like the Nazis!
Thursday, January 24, 2013
If you want to be an Author; Books you must read.
On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft by Stephen King
Two books by Noah Lukeman: The First Five Pages, and How to Land (and Keep) a Literary Agent
Those two books are so good I would recommend reading everything he has written but those are the only two I have read so far.
Self Editing for Fiction Writers by Rennie Browne & Dave King
I have read a few others but so far those have been hands down the most useful/helpful.
I am sure there are other standout books to help aspiring authors so please let me and others know about them in the comment section.
Two books by Noah Lukeman: The First Five Pages, and How to Land (and Keep) a Literary Agent
Those two books are so good I would recommend reading everything he has written but those are the only two I have read so far.
Self Editing for Fiction Writers by Rennie Browne & Dave King
I have read a few others but so far those have been hands down the most useful/helpful.
I am sure there are other standout books to help aspiring authors so please let me and others know about them in the comment section.
Editing my book
So, I've finished my book, the first very rough draft, that is. I thought it was time to celebrate, it is a major accomplishment after all. And more importantly start the query process. But I've learned it's not time to start the query process. I guess I read somewhere something along the lines of "great you finished your book, time to start querying." But I guess it meant completely finished. Now I have put querying on hold, and picked up the book to edit it. Man is it a lot. Almost overwhelming. I can do it though, God help me.
For the first chapter I marked 94 edits of some sort. Today I added about 30 more. I haven't decided if I am going to look at it right away after I make those changes or come back to it later once I am deeper into the book but I know that this is not the last round. I just read a great book that said you should only start querying once you are completely done editing the book, his example was the 40th draft. I doubt I'll get to forty but I will say this. I a much more capable editor now than I was 3 months ago, and I was much better then, than I was a year ago. I am very proud of how far I have come along in my ability to edit and honestly a year ago I would not have thought I would be able to be where I am now ever. What is even more encouraging is that I see myself not only capable of further improvement but I have no doubt that I will keep improving.
For the first chapter I marked 94 edits of some sort. Today I added about 30 more. I haven't decided if I am going to look at it right away after I make those changes or come back to it later once I am deeper into the book but I know that this is not the last round. I just read a great book that said you should only start querying once you are completely done editing the book, his example was the 40th draft. I doubt I'll get to forty but I will say this. I a much more capable editor now than I was 3 months ago, and I was much better then, than I was a year ago. I am very proud of how far I have come along in my ability to edit and honestly a year ago I would not have thought I would be able to be where I am now ever. What is even more encouraging is that I see myself not only capable of further improvement but I have no doubt that I will keep improving.
Wednesday, January 23, 2013
Back at it
It has been a while since my last post. Could it be I was depressed about the outcome of the election. Well no. I was fairly certain that Obama was going to win I could see it coming. It has just been two months but it feels like a lot longer. Looking back at it now there are some things I want to address.
First in general the Democrats were sore winners. On the night of the election at my girlfriends apartment complex many people rushed out celebrating and they were quite obnoxious, some were using a lot of profanity, mainly towards Romney, but also towards anyone that requested they quiet down.
Also working at a restaurant I had multiple guests come and gloat, they were extremely ecstatic, and I cannot understand for the life of me why.
Hopefully if you are reading this you have already read my previous posts on politics and you understand that I am a rational but politically active but logical person.
Having friends across the political spectrum I am shocked by how deeply divided people still are over the election. I would expect that if Romney would have won it wouldn't be that big of a deal to most democrats, I mean both Romney and McCain are nearly democrats themselves, neither one are anything like Bush. Although Palin was abysmal and Ryan was %100 republican I still do not see the big deal. Granted Obama has been better than what I feared I still hate Obamacare, I still do not have insurance. And this whole gun situation is a little scary but more on that later.
I guess one of my biggest problems is that I still need a job, and it doesn't seem to be getting any easier. The government has yet to help me help myself even though I have asked. and I made more money in 2010, even with going on vacation to Germany for 3(yes Three) months, than 2011 and 2012 combined but part of that might be due to my motorcycle accident.
So this was more of a rant than anything but sometimes you have to get things off of your chest in order to move on to things that are actually important.
First in general the Democrats were sore winners. On the night of the election at my girlfriends apartment complex many people rushed out celebrating and they were quite obnoxious, some were using a lot of profanity, mainly towards Romney, but also towards anyone that requested they quiet down.
Also working at a restaurant I had multiple guests come and gloat, they were extremely ecstatic, and I cannot understand for the life of me why.
Hopefully if you are reading this you have already read my previous posts on politics and you understand that I am a rational but politically active but logical person.
Having friends across the political spectrum I am shocked by how deeply divided people still are over the election. I would expect that if Romney would have won it wouldn't be that big of a deal to most democrats, I mean both Romney and McCain are nearly democrats themselves, neither one are anything like Bush. Although Palin was abysmal and Ryan was %100 republican I still do not see the big deal. Granted Obama has been better than what I feared I still hate Obamacare, I still do not have insurance. And this whole gun situation is a little scary but more on that later.
I guess one of my biggest problems is that I still need a job, and it doesn't seem to be getting any easier. The government has yet to help me help myself even though I have asked. and I made more money in 2010, even with going on vacation to Germany for 3(yes Three) months, than 2011 and 2012 combined but part of that might be due to my motorcycle accident.
So this was more of a rant than anything but sometimes you have to get things off of your chest in order to move on to things that are actually important.
Saturday, October 13, 2012
Politics continued: Welfare
It seems that more people have problems with welfare than not. Most people do not like the idea of someone taking their money and giving it to someone else. You say "Why don't you go earn your own money." The counter is that the people who receive welfare are incapable of at least momentarily of providing for themselves. That side that is pro welfare would say there is not enough.
Where do I stand. Well the conclusion that I have come to is not on either end of the spectrum, nor in the middle, it is somewhere far off on a radical island with ideas that however logical they may be would never be adopted. The thing is, that I do not see the current system working or any type of logical compromise anywhere along the spectrum.
Lets analyze the system. In a free market system life is dog eat dog. They only handout anyone is going to get is one that is freely given. So welfare is not a capitalist ideal, is it a socialist ideal? yes it is. Hopefully you have read my previous blog and understand that socialism in my view is not a negative thing but it is often misused which is negative and that a pure form of either economy is incapable of functioning.
So welfare is a form of socialism, yes. I say then if you choose socialism it has to be all the way. I point out that the problems come the government trying to keep its cake and eating it to. So if you implement a socialist idea you have to do it all. I say ok you want to take part in socialism you will, if you want money from the government then the government has the right to put you to work however they see fit. Give an individual the freedom to work on their own, attempt to allow them to provide for themselves, if they don't then with the government should have every right to force someone to work. I would suggest having some type of program where businesses reach out to employ people who would other wise be on welfare for maybe a type of tax break, but then we could potentially have road crews manned by otherwise unemployed. (just an example that comes to mind.)
So for the people that are handicapped, Social security, or injured virtually nothing would change at all. I have lived in the ghetto for many years and I have seen first hand the misuse of finances. I saw neighbors (of no specific ethnicity) Sit in front of their house with the door open and air conditioning running for hours,the tv on with no one home, (solution, energy cap.) Kids drinking soda's and fake juice by the gallons, individually wrapped snacks and just generally food with little or no nutritional value, (Solution, tighter food stamp regulations.)
Are any human rights up in arms, well I say they have the freedom to get a job, make money and spend it how they please(except for the energy part that is just irresponsible.) If however someone else is providing for them, well, who ever foots the bill should have the larger say in how it is spent.
In many forms these ideas are in existence but I feel they are not as socialist as they need to be to function properly. Maybe if you receive welfare for your children you would be required to not have any more or be incarcerated, or possibly subject to some kind of preemptive forced birth control maybe even sterilized. I mean really, no one has the right to be a burden on the rest of society, so if you cannot use your freedom to be responsible why should anyone be able to keep that freedom.
Man Shane you are harsh. No harsh is Free Market, every man for themselves. I am logical enough to see that if you are going to implement a system you have to do the whole package or else it will not work.
Where do I stand. Well the conclusion that I have come to is not on either end of the spectrum, nor in the middle, it is somewhere far off on a radical island with ideas that however logical they may be would never be adopted. The thing is, that I do not see the current system working or any type of logical compromise anywhere along the spectrum.
Lets analyze the system. In a free market system life is dog eat dog. They only handout anyone is going to get is one that is freely given. So welfare is not a capitalist ideal, is it a socialist ideal? yes it is. Hopefully you have read my previous blog and understand that socialism in my view is not a negative thing but it is often misused which is negative and that a pure form of either economy is incapable of functioning.
So welfare is a form of socialism, yes. I say then if you choose socialism it has to be all the way. I point out that the problems come the government trying to keep its cake and eating it to. So if you implement a socialist idea you have to do it all. I say ok you want to take part in socialism you will, if you want money from the government then the government has the right to put you to work however they see fit. Give an individual the freedom to work on their own, attempt to allow them to provide for themselves, if they don't then with the government should have every right to force someone to work. I would suggest having some type of program where businesses reach out to employ people who would other wise be on welfare for maybe a type of tax break, but then we could potentially have road crews manned by otherwise unemployed. (just an example that comes to mind.)
So for the people that are handicapped, Social security, or injured virtually nothing would change at all. I have lived in the ghetto for many years and I have seen first hand the misuse of finances. I saw neighbors (of no specific ethnicity) Sit in front of their house with the door open and air conditioning running for hours,the tv on with no one home, (solution, energy cap.) Kids drinking soda's and fake juice by the gallons, individually wrapped snacks and just generally food with little or no nutritional value, (Solution, tighter food stamp regulations.)
Are any human rights up in arms, well I say they have the freedom to get a job, make money and spend it how they please(except for the energy part that is just irresponsible.) If however someone else is providing for them, well, who ever foots the bill should have the larger say in how it is spent.
In many forms these ideas are in existence but I feel they are not as socialist as they need to be to function properly. Maybe if you receive welfare for your children you would be required to not have any more or be incarcerated, or possibly subject to some kind of preemptive forced birth control maybe even sterilized. I mean really, no one has the right to be a burden on the rest of society, so if you cannot use your freedom to be responsible why should anyone be able to keep that freedom.
Man Shane you are harsh. No harsh is Free Market, every man for themselves. I am logical enough to see that if you are going to implement a system you have to do the whole package or else it will not work.
Wednesday, September 26, 2012
Politics continued (Economic)
I would recommend reading the first part of this continuation if you already have not.
On the subject of The economy:
I am going to have to break this up in a lot of smaller pieces, so let us start with regulations.
Most Republicans are anti-regulation and it looks like most Democrats are control freaks.
I of course have the extremely logical view of "You should regulate what needs to be regulated and regulate as much as needed to be regulated." I suppose many people feel the same way but differ as to the "what" that needs to be regulated and "how much" is adequate. Obviously we can not have companies just pouring toxic chemicals into lakes, rivers, landfills, my mouth , and at least for me anti monopolies makes sense(more on that later) everyone agrees that price fixing for anything is bad.
So on one side you have Socialism and on the other Capitalism(better, Free Market) With a completely free market there would be no government, everything would be private, including the military and police. In pure Socialism 100% of everything is decided by the government. I firmly believe that neither extreme could function for humans. So how do we decide where on the scale we should put ourselves? I think we should look at what are we trying to produce. I would like to produce Justice and efficiency(lack of wastefulness in, time, material, labor, funds, etc.) Obviously the means to fund this is by taxes. But that leaves out so many things that they tax us for, maybe not as much as you expect. For; to accomplish Justice you need things like roads, to be efficient, I support the idea of public schools.
Some things that do not fall under my two category are, public funding for arts, I just do not see it as necessary government subsidy, I feel that there are more than enough people to privately fund the arts. Of course there are the different departments that would need funding, there would still be the DMV, Wildlife agencies, etc. So from a macro perspective it would look very similar to how things are now, and I think that is because for most ideas the best one usually rises to the top, at least partially. The problem, real problem with any governing body is corruption, those in power taking advantage to make their lives better. Theoretically a form of Socialism(not pure socialism) would be better than free market if there was no corruption, it would have the best people to decide what is best for everyone and they would not take the best anything for themselves. There would be one car company, one phone company, one anything company, and it would all be Government Inc. Everyone would get the best phone, computer, car, etc. for whatever purpose they needed it. Sadly history has proven that Socialism is impossible because people are evil, and most forms come with the government telling you where to live and work, what to eat, who to shoot. (I haven't thought of anything else specific that gets funded but shouldn't yet)
With this ground work I can move on to recent happenings in the economy with recession. So in the deregulated free market we had some major finacial cornerstones basicly fail, along with a few other things that failed, and the government bailed them out. Unfortunately the bailing out of them is a form of socialism that does not work well with the free market aspect. You can not have your cake and eat it too, and you made your bed, now you get to "lie" in it. Were they too big to fail?? No I say, but they have their hands in too many politicians pockets to fail. I think it is obvious that both sides of the aisles make their decisions( by that I mean get their decisions made by) the major contributors that get them elected. The evidence is obvious by the way the system works, maybe you don't see it yet because no one pointed it out, but now you are reading this and you will start noticing.
What does all this mean, well we are not really in a Free Market or Socialist market, but a oligarchical business government, where politicians gain power by 'entities with money' and most decisions are made based on the investors interests with the remaining details hammered out by Free Market or Socialist ideals. With this form of government only the investors win. The occupy people don't realize this, most people don't, I think if they went after the problem which is the system they would have a lot more success. It is not that companies are bad, or that people shouldn't be rich, The system however shouldn't be where they get make up all the rules to the games and we play by them, it should be that the people figure out the best rules and they play by them.
For a side note while we are on the subject of Occupy wall street, most of them are bitter, jaded, delusional. How did anyone get money?? well they had something of worth, whether it be, Gold, Labor, an Idea, Money, Land, etc. and they traded it for it a profit, and kept trading it, or creating other forms of something that was of worth diversifying their ability to create profit and they didn't lose more than they gained. They passed down their profit, and/or the ability to make profit. Somehow some people were not born into wealth and may have had a limited ability to make a profit, but over all wealth didn't just pick sides, it was a long process of smart/lucky people gaining wealth from the dumb/unlucky. When you boil it all down no one forced Millions of Americans to give money to a few Americans making them rich in the process, they did it daily little by little, every time they went to McDonalds, Wal Mart, and bought the newest version of Windows.
So to summarize where do I stand, well there needs to be a lot of reform in how our elected officials create legislature and after that over time the proper balance of Free Market and Socialism will happen naturally.
On the subject of The economy:
I am going to have to break this up in a lot of smaller pieces, so let us start with regulations.
Most Republicans are anti-regulation and it looks like most Democrats are control freaks.
I of course have the extremely logical view of "You should regulate what needs to be regulated and regulate as much as needed to be regulated." I suppose many people feel the same way but differ as to the "what" that needs to be regulated and "how much" is adequate. Obviously we can not have companies just pouring toxic chemicals into lakes, rivers, landfills, my mouth , and at least for me anti monopolies makes sense(more on that later) everyone agrees that price fixing for anything is bad.
So on one side you have Socialism and on the other Capitalism(better, Free Market) With a completely free market there would be no government, everything would be private, including the military and police. In pure Socialism 100% of everything is decided by the government. I firmly believe that neither extreme could function for humans. So how do we decide where on the scale we should put ourselves? I think we should look at what are we trying to produce. I would like to produce Justice and efficiency(lack of wastefulness in, time, material, labor, funds, etc.) Obviously the means to fund this is by taxes. But that leaves out so many things that they tax us for, maybe not as much as you expect. For; to accomplish Justice you need things like roads, to be efficient, I support the idea of public schools.
Some things that do not fall under my two category are, public funding for arts, I just do not see it as necessary government subsidy, I feel that there are more than enough people to privately fund the arts. Of course there are the different departments that would need funding, there would still be the DMV, Wildlife agencies, etc. So from a macro perspective it would look very similar to how things are now, and I think that is because for most ideas the best one usually rises to the top, at least partially. The problem, real problem with any governing body is corruption, those in power taking advantage to make their lives better. Theoretically a form of Socialism(not pure socialism) would be better than free market if there was no corruption, it would have the best people to decide what is best for everyone and they would not take the best anything for themselves. There would be one car company, one phone company, one anything company, and it would all be Government Inc. Everyone would get the best phone, computer, car, etc. for whatever purpose they needed it. Sadly history has proven that Socialism is impossible because people are evil, and most forms come with the government telling you where to live and work, what to eat, who to shoot. (I haven't thought of anything else specific that gets funded but shouldn't yet)
With this ground work I can move on to recent happenings in the economy with recession. So in the deregulated free market we had some major finacial cornerstones basicly fail, along with a few other things that failed, and the government bailed them out. Unfortunately the bailing out of them is a form of socialism that does not work well with the free market aspect. You can not have your cake and eat it too, and you made your bed, now you get to "lie" in it. Were they too big to fail?? No I say, but they have their hands in too many politicians pockets to fail. I think it is obvious that both sides of the aisles make their decisions( by that I mean get their decisions made by) the major contributors that get them elected. The evidence is obvious by the way the system works, maybe you don't see it yet because no one pointed it out, but now you are reading this and you will start noticing.
What does all this mean, well we are not really in a Free Market or Socialist market, but a oligarchical business government, where politicians gain power by 'entities with money' and most decisions are made based on the investors interests with the remaining details hammered out by Free Market or Socialist ideals. With this form of government only the investors win. The occupy people don't realize this, most people don't, I think if they went after the problem which is the system they would have a lot more success. It is not that companies are bad, or that people shouldn't be rich, The system however shouldn't be where they get make up all the rules to the games and we play by them, it should be that the people figure out the best rules and they play by them.
For a side note while we are on the subject of Occupy wall street, most of them are bitter, jaded, delusional. How did anyone get money?? well they had something of worth, whether it be, Gold, Labor, an Idea, Money, Land, etc. and they traded it for it a profit, and kept trading it, or creating other forms of something that was of worth diversifying their ability to create profit and they didn't lose more than they gained. They passed down their profit, and/or the ability to make profit. Somehow some people were not born into wealth and may have had a limited ability to make a profit, but over all wealth didn't just pick sides, it was a long process of smart/lucky people gaining wealth from the dumb/unlucky. When you boil it all down no one forced Millions of Americans to give money to a few Americans making them rich in the process, they did it daily little by little, every time they went to McDonalds, Wal Mart, and bought the newest version of Windows.
So to summarize where do I stand, well there needs to be a lot of reform in how our elected officials create legislature and after that over time the proper balance of Free Market and Socialism will happen naturally.
Friday, September 21, 2012
Another Poem, My Teacher Hates Me
My teacher
hates me
First day of class, a paper is passed
I fill it out, with no
reason to doubt
So many things to say, Then it is taken away
Later on a shock, from what my teacher
has said,
In
un-exact words she wishes all Novelists dead
My mind spins, She continues
and cheerfully grins
What have I done?, That she hates me a ton
I took poetry class to become a better
writer,
I
don’t want to pick sides or be a fighter
Poems are good, and books are nice
I
ignored and forgot it, until she said it twice
Why is it wrong to tell a story?
Of
heroes and swords, kingdoms and glory
Or haunted houses filled with spirits
But
they are only fiction, no reason to fear it
On the third time I’ve become inspired
For
school I write this, at work I could get fired
But if failure on my poem is bestowed
Is
it from discrimination or has it been earned and owed
And like wise for a grade of A or
passing
Did
I deserve it, or is it because of the content, her, reacting?
Sunday, September 16, 2012
Identity Politics, If you read this post it will change your life
Hi I am Shane,
It seems that over the last couple years I have been hearing a lot about identity and "who you are" based on titles. Right now with the election just around the corner the seemingly most important aspect of who people are is their political affiliation.
There are two main aspects that I am going to cover in this post, they are what I believe politically and why, and the general subject of labeling. This could potentially hurt me more than help, that is only if what people thought of me mattered; but the truth is that it shouldn't except for a small percentage of people who would be so different than me they would be borderline(or beyond) extremest or legitimately clinically insane.(a little redundant but I wanted to make sure that you knew I was explicitly referring to people who are diagnosed by doctors.(I guess I could have just said that,... changed it and erased all this, but that's no fun and this is my blog.)
Who I am, no better, what labels I want to place on myself:
An author, I want to be known as an author, I want to be able to say I am an author, have proof/evidence, and I want to eliminate the ability for people to argue against that.
A Christian, "wait," my christian friends maybe saying, "That should be first on your list," I agree, it should be, and I want it to be first on my list, however to put it first on my list would be dishonest both by my true(only current) aspirations, and actions so if having it first makes me less of a christian, then having it second makes it closer to belonging first where I want it to be.(save the fake it till you make it).
I think the third thing that I want to be right now is a good husband. I spent a bit thinking about how I wanted to word this part, and I went back and forth about it and this is what I decided. "but Shane you aren't married" I know and while I don't think I necessarily have to accomplish this goal before I get married, I think I at least have to begin striving towards the goal before I should. Quick note for accomplishing this one, I think that if I am successful at the two titles above it(especially number two) I will be well on my way to being successful in this one.
On to some titles others use: Democrat, Bulldog, Republican, Trekkie, Libertarian, Socialist, White, Black, Racist, Muslim, Catholic, Baptist, Shintoist(?), Gator, Yankee, Gay, Historian, Harvard Grad, Drunk, Chinese, Heterosexual, Philanthropist Dentist, Reformist, Gangster, Handicapped, Jesuit, Aggie, Realist, European, King, Prince, Entertainer, Lover, Reader, Gun Slinger, Dish Washer, Realtor, Patron, Trojan, Asian, Spanish, Latino, Cuban, Mixed, Feminist, Nazi, Control Freak, Apathetic....on and on it could go(don't read in the order or titles I chose).
So what spurred all this? Well a friend posted an article "Why I am a Christian Democrat"
Nothing I read was new, I've heard it all before, from all sides for and against. But I have been thinking about labels recently, additionally I recently had a facebook argument with someone I didn't know(it was on a mutual friends wall) that actually changed my stance on a political subject, well it didn't change it technically but more on that later. Long story short I want to write something here that compels people to think a little, analyze why they really believe the way they do and ultimately going from being so stubborn/hardheaded/foolish to being a little more sincere and a lot less prideful(thinking that their way is the only way and they must be right)
What I believe in politically:
I was(Still am just don't feel like changing it) a registered Republican(I want to vote in primaries) My mom is a Registered Republican My Grandparents all are, I don't know if my dad is registered or not but I think that if he were it would be Republican he voted for Bush Sr. in 88, or 92, and G. W. in 00 or 04 (pay close attention to the ors,)
However I have thoroughly distanced myself from calling myself a Republican, They just don't stand for what I believe in(enough) I feel like I relate closest with the CDU/SDU of Germany.
On the subject of (drum roll please) Health care...
This is a big one, I strongly believe that the government has no right to force me to have healthcare in any form or that anyone should pay for mine or that I should pay for anyone else's. Why?, individual rights that the government"s place is not to interfere in my personal life as long as it doesn't hurt anyone else(very libertarian ideal) the democrat argues(but it does hurt society and if you can pay for it now you create a bigger burden, I understand that there are a lot of people who are a burden on society, they are already on welfare, and if the current more liberal system for hospitals and health providers were not in place healthcare would be affordable for me to where I would not be a burden.) Also I believe that the bigger the government the worse it is (very republican ideal) The democrat argues that it is necessary to enforce and mandate/regulate the healthcare, I respond that the government is corrupt, inefficient and does not have the right to (en)force
or mandate that I have healthcare.
The environment:
I feel that the liberal point of view is the most uniformed and follows the most blindly, so you would probably be surprised that I line up almost completely on the liberal side of this subject.
I believe in efficiency, that translate into fuel efficiency, I believe we need to stem our dependency on fossil fuels, I hate wastefulness which means I will out recycle even the greenest of people, I love the beauty of nature, I hate extinction, and pollution.
Did you know that, The eruption(explosion) of Mt. St. Helens produced more pollution of any type, with the exception of radiation, but including greenhouse, than the combined entire existence of the human race. but that doesn't give us the right to just keep making it worse. There are Islands(that were inhabited) on Viking maps that are now completely covered by ice, but at the same time, lands, cities, speculated civilizations, that are covered by oceans from rising sea levels, so it is a natural cycle that the Earth goes through, but I also see the evidence that humans are affecting climate change in a negative way(I feel that "green" people exaggerate it but I still want to prevent it.) We need to do the best job at taking care of the planet that we can, why I am against drilling in Alaska, and pro the mandate that we have to use a specific type of brown coal for electricity, when most of ours are in protected areas (very complicated subject and a decision you probably haven't heard of) because that forces us to use other countries supplies of it, meaning they run out and America still has some. Republicans complain about the debt our children are going to inherit, what about the planet they are going to inherit?
Next subject chosen by way of lottery ball:
Voter ID's
This is the subject that a friend posted a facebook status about and I argued with someone I didn't know, over the course of twenty-four hours. I was hard-lined you must show a valid ID, because of voter fraud, illegals and people who don't have the right voting. My reasoning is that you have to provide ID and jump through much more complicated hoops to purchase a gun so why not voting which affects everyone. They argued that the amount of voter fraud is minimal(they provided websites(liberal ones so of course they skew the information in their favor) I did my own research and ultimately found nothing one way or the other I found compelling) and that it is too difficult for elderly and that in some places there people who try and make it difficult for people to register and then vote. (This is where I say something that is going to really make people mad, but it is the truth) I personally do not feel that providing an ID is difficult, I know of people with Down-syndrome with ID's and there are so many "initiatives" to get people registered to vote it is nearly as easy to get people ID's. I hate I hate I hate, the idea that people who don't have the right to vote do and honestly it does not bother me that people who are too lazy to get, or even bring, an ID would not be allowed to vote. The evidence that people are so disenfranchised and incapable of getting an ID just is not there and the truth is that it mainly affects people who are ideologically opposite of me making the opposing argument carry less weight.(you hate me because I'm honest but if the truth is that Democrats want to keep tabs on everyone and regulate everything so if it were Republicans having difficulties with ID's you better believe the Democrats would have laws in place requiring two forms of ID's and a birth certificate.)
So this is the one that (changed) my stance, and how did it (change?) Before I would have physically fought someone on the subject, but after hearing their side, thinking about it, doing research, thinking about it some more, I decided that it just isn't worth it, as much as I hate the idea of evil people rigging elections(election fraud happens a lot but voter fraud is not the same and both sides have voter fraud(documented, it is real)) with voter fraud, the opposing position was good enough that I do not want to infringe on a voter's rights. Am I still pro-ID? YES. Am I zealous? NO. So would I support requiring ID? Yes. would it bother me if it failed? No!(that is as long as the current trends stay the same, based on the information that I found.)
I have soooo much more to write, but I think I have to split into two posts, please comment, I may reply and actually if you would like you can choose the order/subjects of the next political subjects. Or you may want clarification or more details.
To be continued
It seems that over the last couple years I have been hearing a lot about identity and "who you are" based on titles. Right now with the election just around the corner the seemingly most important aspect of who people are is their political affiliation.
There are two main aspects that I am going to cover in this post, they are what I believe politically and why, and the general subject of labeling. This could potentially hurt me more than help, that is only if what people thought of me mattered; but the truth is that it shouldn't except for a small percentage of people who would be so different than me they would be borderline(or beyond) extremest or legitimately clinically insane.(a little redundant but I wanted to make sure that you knew I was explicitly referring to people who are diagnosed by doctors.(I guess I could have just said that,... changed it and erased all this, but that's no fun and this is my blog.)
Who I am, no better, what labels I want to place on myself:
An author, I want to be known as an author, I want to be able to say I am an author, have proof/evidence, and I want to eliminate the ability for people to argue against that.
A Christian, "wait," my christian friends maybe saying, "That should be first on your list," I agree, it should be, and I want it to be first on my list, however to put it first on my list would be dishonest both by my true(only current) aspirations, and actions so if having it first makes me less of a christian, then having it second makes it closer to belonging first where I want it to be.(save the fake it till you make it).
I think the third thing that I want to be right now is a good husband. I spent a bit thinking about how I wanted to word this part, and I went back and forth about it and this is what I decided. "but Shane you aren't married" I know and while I don't think I necessarily have to accomplish this goal before I get married, I think I at least have to begin striving towards the goal before I should. Quick note for accomplishing this one, I think that if I am successful at the two titles above it(especially number two) I will be well on my way to being successful in this one.
On to some titles others use: Democrat, Bulldog, Republican, Trekkie, Libertarian, Socialist, White, Black, Racist, Muslim, Catholic, Baptist, Shintoist(?), Gator, Yankee, Gay, Historian, Harvard Grad, Drunk, Chinese, Heterosexual, Philanthropist Dentist, Reformist, Gangster, Handicapped, Jesuit, Aggie, Realist, European, King, Prince, Entertainer, Lover, Reader, Gun Slinger, Dish Washer, Realtor, Patron, Trojan, Asian, Spanish, Latino, Cuban, Mixed, Feminist, Nazi, Control Freak, Apathetic....on and on it could go(don't read in the order or titles I chose).
So what spurred all this? Well a friend posted an article "Why I am a Christian Democrat"
Nothing I read was new, I've heard it all before, from all sides for and against. But I have been thinking about labels recently, additionally I recently had a facebook argument with someone I didn't know(it was on a mutual friends wall) that actually changed my stance on a political subject, well it didn't change it technically but more on that later. Long story short I want to write something here that compels people to think a little, analyze why they really believe the way they do and ultimately going from being so stubborn/hardheaded/foolish to being a little more sincere and a lot less prideful(thinking that their way is the only way and they must be right)
What I believe in politically:
I was(Still am just don't feel like changing it) a registered Republican(I want to vote in primaries) My mom is a Registered Republican My Grandparents all are, I don't know if my dad is registered or not but I think that if he were it would be Republican he voted for Bush Sr. in 88, or 92, and G. W. in 00 or 04 (pay close attention to the ors,)
However I have thoroughly distanced myself from calling myself a Republican, They just don't stand for what I believe in(enough) I feel like I relate closest with the CDU/SDU of Germany.
On the subject of (drum roll please) Health care...
This is a big one, I strongly believe that the government has no right to force me to have healthcare in any form or that anyone should pay for mine or that I should pay for anyone else's. Why?, individual rights that the government"s place is not to interfere in my personal life as long as it doesn't hurt anyone else(very libertarian ideal) the democrat argues(but it does hurt society and if you can pay for it now you create a bigger burden, I understand that there are a lot of people who are a burden on society, they are already on welfare, and if the current more liberal system for hospitals and health providers were not in place healthcare would be affordable for me to where I would not be a burden.) Also I believe that the bigger the government the worse it is (very republican ideal) The democrat argues that it is necessary to enforce and mandate/regulate the healthcare, I respond that the government is corrupt, inefficient and does not have the right to (en)force
or mandate that I have healthcare.
The environment:
I feel that the liberal point of view is the most uniformed and follows the most blindly, so you would probably be surprised that I line up almost completely on the liberal side of this subject.
I believe in efficiency, that translate into fuel efficiency, I believe we need to stem our dependency on fossil fuels, I hate wastefulness which means I will out recycle even the greenest of people, I love the beauty of nature, I hate extinction, and pollution.
Did you know that, The eruption(explosion) of Mt. St. Helens produced more pollution of any type, with the exception of radiation, but including greenhouse, than the combined entire existence of the human race. but that doesn't give us the right to just keep making it worse. There are Islands(that were inhabited) on Viking maps that are now completely covered by ice, but at the same time, lands, cities, speculated civilizations, that are covered by oceans from rising sea levels, so it is a natural cycle that the Earth goes through, but I also see the evidence that humans are affecting climate change in a negative way(I feel that "green" people exaggerate it but I still want to prevent it.) We need to do the best job at taking care of the planet that we can, why I am against drilling in Alaska, and pro the mandate that we have to use a specific type of brown coal for electricity, when most of ours are in protected areas (very complicated subject and a decision you probably haven't heard of) because that forces us to use other countries supplies of it, meaning they run out and America still has some. Republicans complain about the debt our children are going to inherit, what about the planet they are going to inherit?
Next subject chosen by way of lottery ball:
Voter ID's
This is the subject that a friend posted a facebook status about and I argued with someone I didn't know, over the course of twenty-four hours. I was hard-lined you must show a valid ID, because of voter fraud, illegals and people who don't have the right voting. My reasoning is that you have to provide ID and jump through much more complicated hoops to purchase a gun so why not voting which affects everyone. They argued that the amount of voter fraud is minimal(they provided websites(liberal ones so of course they skew the information in their favor) I did my own research and ultimately found nothing one way or the other I found compelling) and that it is too difficult for elderly and that in some places there people who try and make it difficult for people to register and then vote. (This is where I say something that is going to really make people mad, but it is the truth) I personally do not feel that providing an ID is difficult, I know of people with Down-syndrome with ID's and there are so many "initiatives" to get people registered to vote it is nearly as easy to get people ID's. I hate I hate I hate, the idea that people who don't have the right to vote do and honestly it does not bother me that people who are too lazy to get, or even bring, an ID would not be allowed to vote. The evidence that people are so disenfranchised and incapable of getting an ID just is not there and the truth is that it mainly affects people who are ideologically opposite of me making the opposing argument carry less weight.(you hate me because I'm honest but if the truth is that Democrats want to keep tabs on everyone and regulate everything so if it were Republicans having difficulties with ID's you better believe the Democrats would have laws in place requiring two forms of ID's and a birth certificate.)
So this is the one that (changed) my stance, and how did it (change?) Before I would have physically fought someone on the subject, but after hearing their side, thinking about it, doing research, thinking about it some more, I decided that it just isn't worth it, as much as I hate the idea of evil people rigging elections(election fraud happens a lot but voter fraud is not the same and both sides have voter fraud(documented, it is real)) with voter fraud, the opposing position was good enough that I do not want to infringe on a voter's rights. Am I still pro-ID? YES. Am I zealous? NO. So would I support requiring ID? Yes. would it bother me if it failed? No!(that is as long as the current trends stay the same, based on the information that I found.)
I have soooo much more to write, but I think I have to split into two posts, please comment, I may reply and actually if you would like you can choose the order/subjects of the next political subjects. Or you may want clarification or more details.
To be continued
Thursday, September 13, 2012
A poem I wrote for class, You Can Do It
You can do it.
You can do it
You can do it
You can do it You can
do it
You can do it You can do it
You can do it You can do it You can do it
You can do it, You can do it, You can do it
You can do it, You can do it, You can do it
Youcandoit Youcandoit Youcandoit Youcandoit Youcandoit Youcandoit
I turn to face the immortal beast
Its scream sends a vibration, shaking the Earth beneath my feet
Its piercing eyes black as night
An aura of darkness absorbing light
Rows of teeth countless as the stars
Its armored skin displaying trophies of scars
Its power is hate, eternal Ferocious
I question my fate, Take a bold step cautious
For eternity its rule has terrorized the land
With sweaty palms I grip my sword with both hands
The time has come the hour is here
The gap is closed as we both draw near
Each Step taken swifter than the last
Fate has chosen, her die is cast
You can do it
You can do it
Tuesday, September 11, 2012
Developing my platform/ This has some real content
I am doing this blog for one reason; to make a name and expand my platform, in order to do that I have to write something here that people like and enjoy and give them reasons to come back so I suppose the best way to do that is write. I will save the stuff that is better for twitter for, well, twitter and things like chapter previews and bonuses I will post to my facebook author page. So with no more delay lets talk about the book I am writing now.
The tentative title is: Swords and Wisdom, I am leaning towards an overall title with a subtitle since I think I could write more books for the same world. I know that seems presumptuous but hey I need to be overzealous and confident. I mean if I suck so much at writing then my book will fail and none of this will eventually matter, but if my writing is not half bad then even ok authors makes some money. And I do expect to get an editor.
What is going on with my book? Well, the story is this; In a completely separate existence from Earth there is a world very similar to our planet. The planet is inhabited first by Elves, then Dwarves and then a different type of Elves is created, the are called the Grey Elves. Finally the Humans are created and they live on this planet for thousands of years interacting in what I believe most people would guess as normal and then Vampires hit the scene and create quite the problem. There were plenty of problems before and some of them were solved, but for the sake of my book right now, Vampires are the relevant problem. Then a funny thing happens, Nearly all the Humans are taken off the planet, and there is wide speculation as to why and how, but the important thing is that the Humans that were left all got eaten or turned into Vampires. Oooh, would you like to know more well I have to save something for another blog post, I have to bring you back somehow. So here is current situation, There are no more humans, their only remnants are ruins and vampires, it has been fairly peaceful for the last few centuries, nothing too major. There is a weak peace treaty between the vampires and the other races, basically they don't do anything stupid and the other races wont try to exterminate them. There is a large section of land between the vampires and the Elves that is more or less a no man's land but a meteorite hits there and often meteorites can be very powerful magically. So the Elves secretly send in a pair of Elves to find and retrieve the meteorite and.........
I think that is enough for today as far as the story goes, I mean if you want to read more you might as well just read the book. But some of the things I want accomplish with my book(other than make money, get famous and genuinely entertain the masses), Is have some macro political suggestions, not Democrat, Republican, and a lot of it wont even be relative to modern times but I want my book to cause a little bit of thinking, I want it to be smart but also be accessible to people who are not necessarily smart.
There you go, I am currently 123,000+ into it and I really really really want to finish this month, you can yell at me to help. I sincerely think that I can finish it this month too and get a bit of editing done. Then I get to consider just editing before the next step or start querying for agents.
Thank you for your time
Shane
Feel free to comment
Wednesday, September 5, 2012
Ha ha
So it seems having the ability to write blogs on my phone doesn't help. This is disappointing. My life is to disorganized, I need to hammer out large chunks of time to be productive and then sick to them.
Saturday, August 4, 2012
I have an app now
I always think to myself I need to blog, and a couple days turn into months without posting anything. Hopefully this app will change that.
Monday, June 4, 2012
I need people to be excited about what I do! That means you need to know what I plan on doing.
First I decided to add Chapter 0, as of right now it is really just a prologue.
Also I am over 100,000 words. That is cause for celebration. But everything is taking longer than I expected, as far as the writing is concerned it is because I have not been devoting enough time to it. For the editing part I found that it is harder to do than planned.
First I decided to add Chapter 0, as of right now it is really just a prologue.
Also I am over 100,000 words. That is cause for celebration. But everything is taking longer than I expected, as far as the writing is concerned it is because I have not been devoting enough time to it. For the editing part I found that it is harder to do than planned.
Wednesday, May 9, 2012
A little update. Writing is not so easy and it is harder when what you thought is good enough is not. I find my book fun but is it captivating, that is not something I can answer but requires the opinion of others. It is going to take longer to get my book edited than I thought but I will accomplish it :)
Friday, November 25, 2011
National write a novel month
So the challenge to write an entire novel's worth in one month was a great idea. It has really helped me be consistent. The only thing is the hard drive in the laptop I was using died and I lost a little over two days worth of writing. It really was very discouraging but I hope to finish strong in the last five days even if I do not reach fifty thousand words.
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